Talk:CAS Digital Learning in Emergencies (2022-23)/module4-ibrahimkhatip88

-- BarbaraClass (talk) 14:05, 23 December 2022 (CET) -- BarbaraClass (talk) 14:05, 23 December 2022 (CET) -- BarbaraClass (talk) 14:05, 23 December 2022 (CET)

Dear Ibrahim and Abed, Thank you for updating your page, relying on the feedback your colleagues have received. Here are some specific comments: 1) To help you find appropriate verbs for your learning outcomes, please consider Bachman's text attached. "Recognize" is not very explicit. Also please stick to the labels of the concepts "3) open resources education" = OER? and avoid repetitions! This being said, the concepts you have identified are key: welldone :) 2) Under point 5, I understand the OERs are still to be found and assessed against a specific rubric and or given criteria from a rubic (https://tecfa.unige.ch/perso/class/OE-General/OER-RubricTemplateExample.odt) - or are the OERs listed in the table, section 9? 3) Could you please spell out the acronym NWS the first time you use it? 4) I am sorry but I still do not see the relationship between the 4 learning outcomes (LO) listed and the activities. If you stick to these 4 outcomes (even if rephrased) and want to develop this knowledge and skills through your project, then you may: i) find OERs and/or draft one which address concepts as mentioned in LO2; ii) choose one activity and design it fully in the open and with an OEP approach (LO, resources, outcome, assessment, community, etc.). 5) Your page may need some re-organising to make clear what YOUR learning outcomes are and what pertains to the contextual project. Hope this helps, Best